Chapter 17 is ready, and it's a long one. And it's been a loooong time coming.
This is a special chapter to me. As some of you may know, the character Mr. Hanlon is heavily inspired by one of my actual teachers- the events of chapter 1 (The Douche) are things that happened to me last year. I had a teacher correct me about the use of the word syllabuses. The character and the person he's based off of are both assholes. That's where the similarities end though. I did not correct my teacher the way Harold corrected Hanlon in my story. And I did not throw my bag at or otherwise assault my teacher, obviously that'd be wrong ;)
This particular teacher (Who will remain unnamed for obvious reasons!) is a total asshole, so I enjoyed giving his character a well earned beat down.
BUT that's not all. I also want to dedicate this chapter to one of my friends from reddit.
Schleef, I want you to know I'm rooting for you- I know if you practice writing- and just stick with it- you will consistently improve your craft. One day you'll achieve a sense of pride in your art, like I have.
While you're reading this chapter pay attention to my word choice, story structure, and mood building. Take notes.
Chapter 17: The Truth Will Out
Another
knock at the door.
It
cracked open, Administrator Marcy poked her head in.
"Harold,
I'd like to speak with you."
"In
your office?"
"No
need. We'll chat here. Mrs. Wallace, can we have a moment?"
Mrs.
Wallace nodded, and took her coffee cup to the hall.
"Tell
me."
Harold
raised his palms, "Tell you what?"
"What
do you think Harold? Tell me why you threw the bag at Hanlon. You didn't speak
in my office, and I understand why. But we're alone now, so speak."
Harold
leaned back into his chair, and grunted. "He did deserve it. Hanlon is a complete jerk."
He
looked at Mrs. Marcy, and she gestured for him to go on.
"Well.
After your announcement, I was telling my... girlfriend- I was trying to
comfort her. Mr. Hanlon called me
out. And then he started telling the entire class that Joe died because we were
idiots."
Harold
squeezed his knee to reign in his composure.
She
waited for him to continue.
Eventually
his grip slackened, and he sighed. "Hanlon told the class it was our
fault- Joe and I's fault- he died.
Because we had been trying to trap said
animal. He said we were idiots, and the rest of the class should watch our
example so they don't follow it."
"It
wasn't wise- he's right about that." Marcy leaned forward. "But it was
wrong of him to... make an agenda out of what happened."
"How
did he even know what we were doing out there? Did the police tell everybody?"
Marcy
leaned back again. "Of course not. But they
told us Joe had been killed by
an animal. We had a faculty meeting. It seems Mrs. Isaac put two and two
together. And if she remembers correctly, she warned you it could be dangerous
to corner a wild animal... She says you promised you wouldn't."
"Her
memory is fine. But we never cornered the animal. It went after Joe when he was
alone."
She
nodded. "I understand. And I want you to understand my purpose for talking
to you about this is twofold. One: I wanted the full story of what transpired
between you and Hanlon. And two: I wanted you to talk about this with somebody.
I won't force you to talk any further, but I want you to know- really know-
that you don't have to bear this burden alone. I'm an open door."
"Thanks
Mrs. Marcy. I know."
"And
one other thing." She caught his gaze and held it gently, "You need
to know what happened to Joe is not your fault."
"If
we hadn't-"
"But
you did. And by all counts, you shouldn't have. Even so, none of you could have
known what would happen, the blame rests squarely on the shoulders of bad luck
and freak accidents. Predators large enough to do... that, they don't live
around here. They aren't supposed to. You couldn't have known the danger would be
so great. Nobody could have. It's a tragedy and you do not need to beat
yourself up for it."
Harold
had nothing to say- he couldn't agree with what she was saying, and he knew she
didn't want to hear his truth.
But
he felt it: Joe wouldn't have died, if Harold hadn't set up the night... hadn't
let Joe walk Kait home without him... Hadn't fallen asleep while his friend was
in need.
Finally
he managed another, "Thanks."
And
Mrs. Marcy stood to leave. Before she turned she said, "Hanlon crossed the
line. I'm giving him in school suspension too. He's going to take his lunch
break in here, so Mrs. Wallace can get some fresh air. He won't be happy to
hear that, but again, he crossed the line. Okay by you, if he supervises for
the next period?"
Harold
grinned. "Sure."
"And,
I'm taking you out of his class. We talked about that option on the first day,
you remember. You said you wanted to stay, but that's no longer an option
because you crossed a harder line than he did. Understood."
Harold
nodded.
She
left.
Mrs.
Wallace came back in. Harold worked at his math assignment, and stifled a broad
yawn. The subtle chill of exhaustion trembled between his shoulders and slid
down the muscles of his back. He wanted to stretch out and nap.
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Bill
Maria sat in his den at his computer, skimming through the search results for 'fatal bear attacks in Pennsylvania’.
His
phone rang and he jumped.
He
whispered to himself, "The police." Then he stood up and picked up
the receiver, "Bill Maria."
"Hey,
hi! This is Al!"
"Al?"
"Shi-
I mean, yeah Al Parson, from over at the museum. I'm the guy who did the
restorations over at the museum, you know... Yesterday."
Bill
sat back down. "What can I do for you Al?"
"Well
I tried calling, um, Harold's number. But it went to voicemail. The director
gave me your number which was on file. That's how I, you know."
Bill
Maria rolled his eyes. "That's how you got a hold of me, sure. But what do
you need."
"Sorry.
I'm calling because I figured out what that other lettering was."
"Ok..."
"You
know, we translated the German and Latin, but do you remember there was some
other alphabet?"
"Yes,
and?"
"Sorry."
Bill
laid a fist on the table and spoke deliberately. "Don't be sorry, just
tell me."
"It's
pretty cool, and I'm just excited. Sorry. So the writing comes from the
Cherokee Syllabary- a pretty genius invention from a Cherokee named Sequoyah.
It honestly out performs lots of other, older forms of writing. Obviously I
can't read it. But I posted the picture the director took, I posted it onto an
online forum where-"
"Al?
Al. It's not on you, but I'm dealing with a recent loss, and I don't have the
energy for a long conversation here. Do me a favor. Just tell me what it said."
"I
am! So I can't read it myself so I can't authenticate it, but one of the users
claims to read Cherokee, and he said... Hold on let me read it, 'the wolf spirit came for revenge and stayed
for evil.' Pretty cool right, it kind a corroborates the other writing we
found on the spear! And it sounds so damn metal."
"Thanks
for letting me know about this, I'll be sure to tell Harold-"
"Hold
on a sec, there's more."
Bill
leaned back in his chair and put a hand to his forehead. "More in the
translation?"
"Well.
Um, no. There's more though, just not in the translation."
He
massaged the bridge of his nose between thumb and forefinger, and shut his eyes,
to let Al Parson run his race.
"So
the incredible thing is one of the specialists here just completed a study of
Cherokee legends. She said the Cherokee considered it taboo to hunt and kill a
wolf, and that they believed... I don't remember whether she said they believed
the wolf's brothers would seek revenge on the hunters, or whether the wolf's
spirit would seek revenge. But either way, it's pretty much all right there on
the spear!"
"Huh.
Neat. Look, I'll make sure to have Harold give you a call, ok?"
Bill
laid his head on the desk, and resigned himself to a longer call than he
wanted.
"Hold
on one more thing! The really weird thing is the Cherokee territory never
ranged up into Pennsylvania. So she and I were talking it out trying to figure
out why these three languages would be on the spear, and we see a couple
options but there's no way to be sure. First, it seems like this came from
around the period of the civil war. German mercenaries fought on both sides,
and Cherokee peoples fought on both sides as well. We wonder if maybe a couple
enlisted men from different backgrounds met during a campaign and then traveled
together after? Stranger things have happened. Or maybe... Well this is a
sadder possibility, but still pretty, um, possible... Maybe the... Well a lot
of villages were destroyed during the war. The Cherokee who wrote this might
have traveled north after being displaced by the war."
"This
is all quite fascinating, Al. Thank you, have a great rest of-"
"But
why were they so worked up over this wolf? Why'd they drive a spear into a
wolf's skull, huh? It seems obviously ritualistic, but the reference to a
Cherokee taboo alongside what obviously appears to be some kind of
documentation from a Catholic rite of exorcism-"
"Exorcism?
What?"
"Well,
yeah, we think so. Why else would there be Latin, it's gotta be Catholic.
Remember it said something about 'expulsion'. Hold on I look it up and-"
"NO!
Don't look it up. Just get to the point."
"Well,
the wording seems like it came from an exorcism, and... Well my friend and I
keep trying to figure out and we're not sure."
There
was a long pause.
"Are
you... Is there anything else, or are we ending on 'not sure'?"
"Yeah,
we're pretty much ending on, um, not sure. That's the fun of history- the
mystery! We have a best guess though, we think a ravening wolf probably killed
some livestock, or some people- maybe the German's family- the Cherokee who
happened to be part of the community mentioned the myth about wolf spirit's
getting revenge. The German, might have blended that with his own
superstitions. One way or another, they killed the wolf. Obviously. But they
also enlisted the help of the priest to exorcise the wolf's vengeful spirit, or
the demon that was possessing the wolf. Interesting theory, but right now it's
still just, uh... Mostly conjecture. We'll do some more digging on our end and
if we figure anything out we'll give you a call. OK, bye!"
The
call ended with a click.
Bill
Maria looked at the phone and shook his head. "What a fuckin'
weirdo."
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Harold
was starting to doze around that time. Math hovered on his peripheries, and his
conscious mind shied away. He drifted further into the comfort of a yawning
void, and as the last remnant of wakefullness slid into the chasm of sleep,
there was a knock at the door.
Neurons
fired, and he could almost feel them, the wires in his brain were crossed and
hot.
But
the cool release of sleep crumbled dried up and crumbled away from him. After a
watching it fall away he was, once again, alert.
Hanlon
entered the room, thermos in his hands.
His
chest was puffed up, more than usual. "I'm here to Supervise, Mrs.
Wallace, enjoy your lunch."
Mrs.
Wallace laughed. On her way out, she shot him a quick, "That's awful kind
of you Ed."
Hanlon
seemed to bristle at the sound of his first name. His shoulders crunched up,
and his eyes got bolder. Mrs. Wallace chuckled, and left.
Harold
looked at Hanlon, he wasn't sure what to feel so he didn't bother to say
anything.
It
was his teacher, who spoke first.
"Mr.
Maria."
Harold
raised his eyebrows, but remained silent.
"I'm
here to say..." He pulled at the collar of his neck, and slicked a hand
over his scalp. "I-I'm sorry."
Harold
smiled.
Mr.
Hanlon cast his eyes down. He took a swig from his thermos, and swallowed it
down. He took a deep breath.
"I
shouldn't-" he shook his head, picked up his thermos and looked at it
longingly. Then he set it down again. "I shouldn't have singled you out. I
shouldn't have... told the class anything about the circumstances surrounding
Joe's... I'm sorry, I was wrong. My
behavior was inappropriate.”
Harold
beamed. He wanted to gloat, but he couldn't think of anything to say. And after
a brief deliberation, he figured leaving Hanlon without a response would make
him more uncomfortable anyway.
So he
went back to his math, and after a while he started to drift again towards
sleep. There on the brink emptiness, he thought of something to say.
"Hanlon, I didn't get any sleep last night. I'm gonna try now. Consider
this my lunch break."
He
opened one eye to gauge Hanlon's response.
Hanlon's
chest heaved, he looked at the clock, and then he took a long drink from his
thermos.
Harold
watched in through a haze of exhaustion. He shut his eyes and listened.
He
heard Mr. Hanlon push his chair back and walk to the door. "I'm gonna run
to the restroom, Mr. Maria."
Harold
made no response.
The
teacher continued, in a lower voice, "I'll be back before you wake up
anyway, you little punk."
Then
Harold heard the door open and shut. Tension sloughed off his shoulders, and
his toes flexed. He fell into a cushion of sleep.
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It
was lunchtime. But Emily wasn't hungry.
She
checked her phone. Harold had told her not to worry, not to feel bad. And it
had the dual effect of making her feel worse for doubting him and ecstatic that
he was still with her.
She
had sent back a '<3' but there was no read-receipt, so she figured he had
his phone off. She wanted to see him.
So
she started to walk the halls.
But
she didn't know where to look. So she wandered between area A. She peeked in on
classes in session, and skipped to the next room.
At
the end of the hall, she saw Hanlon round a corner, coming towards her. She
hated to see him.
He
staggered a little bit, and she could only think of how incredibly stupid and
clumsy he was.
But
she didn't want a confrontation. Not after what had happened in class.
She
wanted to fade away, so she ducked into the girls room.
Emily
knew he had seen her, and she figured he probably knew she only ducked out of
the hall to avoid his wretched ass.... And she didn't care. He could take
offense at her passive avoidance if he wanted to. It was still better than
having an argument- or even a discussion- with a teacher had so little respect
for.
She
let the bathroom door shut behind her, and listened.
Emily
heard, Hanlon's footsteps beyond the door.
Then
she heard him chuckle to himself. He muttered something, but she couldn't make
out what it was.
The
next thing she heard was utter confusion: A flurry of sound, like a rush of
footsteps, and something like a snarl.
She
leaned closer to the door to hear a little clearer.
There
was a thud, and a crack. A scuffle. And a high, desperate scream.
"Fuck!
Get off me!" And then another, shriek- she could hear Hanlon's pain.
She
flinched, and started to shake.
Was
it an attack? A stabbing? In the school! She hated Hanlon, but wouldn't wish
this on him.
She
heard frantic cries, and hall doors slamming shut.
Then
a deadly silence.
She
locked the bathroom door, and huddled in the corner.
Emily
tried to take out her phone but her hands were trembling.
The sounds
came back and this time they were vicious. She heard wet smacks, and a throaty
growl, a body being dragged. Hanlon's voice, now weak, "No, oh no, oh
nooooo. Oh god, p-p-please god..."
Then
a booming voice, probably security. "What the fuck is going- what... the
fuck?"
A
terrible snarl, and the sounds of footsteps running, and security yelling,
"HQ! Call the fucking cops!"
A
distant radio cackle, and security's voice echoing down the hall, "No, not
a shooter, I think it's a goddamn bear! Get an ambulance for- Aaaagghhh!"
She
could hear the pain in his voice. She forced her phone out of her pocket and
but she took too violently to text. She pawed the voice recognition button and
stammered, "Call Harry!"
It
rang. Then she remembered Hanlon, out there... maybe dying. She put the phone
on speaker and lay it on the bathroom floor.
The
sounds of a desperate fight farther down the hall filtered in through the
cracks.
When
she realized it was a losing fight, she deliberately shut the sounds out and
puffed up her resolve.
She
clicked the latch of the restroom door, and felt the little safety it had
offered evaporate. She opened the door and peeked.
The
security guard was flailing against a mass of writhing fur, he raised his broken
hands to protect his face, and they were shredded by snapping yellow teeth.
Claws raked his sides.
She
was transfixed by terror. She saw tears streaming down the security guards
face, his lips were trembling. He offered one last pitiful yelp, before fangs
sank into his cheeks and muffled his cries.
She tore
her eyes away, and searched for Hanlon. He was a mess off gore, but his eyes
were wide, he was staring at her, pleading with his eyes. She looked over her
shoulder once, to judge the distance.
The
animal was tearing off chunks.
She
grabbed Hanlon by the pant leg, and pulled with all her might.
He
weighed a lot.
He
weighed too much.
She
grunted, and started to cry.
Hanlon
shook his head.
She
pulled harder, he flopped up and down and tried to pull himself along with his
un-mangled arm.
There
was an ear splitting howl.
She
looked back and saw the beast, fury in its eyes, looking at her.
Her
panic reached a crescendo, she pulled with every fiber of her strength, and
slid Hanlon over the threshold.
His
leg was on the bathroom tile. She pulled.
His
other leg caught against the door frame.
"FUCK!"
She started to sob, and pulled as hard as she could. "Move your fucking
leg you idiot!"
But
he lay limp.
She
dared not look down the hall. Dared not see how close the beast had come.
She
grabbed Hanlon's other pant leg and jerked it forward.
Emily
hauled with all her might, with a strength she could never have conjured if she
weren't sure her life depended on it.
He
was through the door!
She
shoved him aside, and slammed the door shut.
Her
hands were nearly impossible to control, but she jammed her fingers against the
lock again and again, and breathed a trembling moan when she heard it finally click.
She
tried to listen for the thing in the hall.
'Harold Maria is not available at this time,
if you'd like to leave a message do so-' She hung up and called 911
instead.
Then
she looked at Hanlon. She could not tell if whether he was alive.
She
tried to find his pulse, but the blood squirting made it hard to do. Then she
realized the blood squirting meant the heart was working, and tried to squeeze
his wounds shut.
There
was a heavy thud against the door, but her terrified sobs drowned it out.
Then
there were horrible sound as of claws, scraping along the door.
Another
massive thud, the door strained against its hinges.
She
pinched off the blood flow as best she could. Hanlon's eyes roved in stupid
shock.
A
rumbling growl from beyond reverberated in the tiled bathroom.
Another,
heavy thud on the other side of the door, the housing on the lock began to
flex.
Sirens
in the distance.
The
thudding stopped. She heard a scamper of feet, running back down the hall.
Hanlon
coughed, and groaned, "I'm dead, I'm dead."
He
smelled like shit, whiskey, and raw meat.
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